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Punctuate This

Punctuate This | Writing Exercise

I got this writing exercise from one of my mentors, Kristine Kathryn Rusch, at a workshop I did a few years back. I found it very instructive. It's simple to explain, and much harder to do.

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Punctuate This | Rules

The concept is simple enough.

  • Open the an Excerpt section below. It contains a short excerpt from a book—but only the text. No punctuation. No paragraphing. No capitalization. Nothing except a straight block of text. I did keep the spaces.
  • Copy the excerpt into your word processor. You can do that either by typing or just select, copy, and paste.
  • Add the missing punctuation and paragraphing. 
  • After you finish, go ahead and expand the Original section to compare your punctuation and paragraphing with the original work.

I've also included links to the original books in the examples, if you'd like to get a copy. These are affiliate links, so I get a small percentage from purchases, which I really appreciate.

Punctuate This | Questions

As you study the results and compare your work with the original work, consider some of these questions. You may want to write your thoughts down, if that helps.

  • How do the two different versions sound? What are the differences in the voice of the piece? The character's voice?
  • What differences are there in the pacing of the two different versions? Is one faster or slower than the other?
  • In what ways does the punctuation and paragraphing reveal character? Setting?
  • What else strikes you about the differences between the versions?

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Punctuate This | Exercises

A Dangerous Road: A Smokey Dalton Novel by Kris Nelscott

Exercise

Original

I remember reading A Dangerous Road and thinking that, "I wish I could write a book this good."

Kris Nelscott wrote a mystery set against a time of protest and progress in America, opening following the assassination of Martin Luther King, Jr. It's not the sort of book that I am likely to write. At least right now. I write mysteries, just not historical mysteries. My Moreau Society series is science fiction. My C. Auguste Dupin mysteries are cozy stories with a cat as the detective. I might write historical mysteries someday. If I do, I'd love to write something so amazing.

Project Pope by Clifford D. Simak

Exercise

Original

"Robot believers at the far end of the galaxy endeavor to create a true religion, but their efforts could be shattered by a shocking revelation.

Project Pope highlights many of the themes and concepts found in Simak's work. I reread this book not all that long ago and enjoyed revisiting the characters and the questions raised by this story.

Cujo by Stephen King

Exercise

Original

I love Stephen King's work. I've gone back and reread his books. In Cujo, King creates a character, a monster, that sticks in popular culture alongside other horror movie creatures. The book shows off King's talents for creating characters and intense situations. It isn't the easiest book to read, it hits a bunch of triggers for me as a parent and as a pet-owner. It's also hard to put down, hard to get away from once you've started reading.

About the Author Ryan

Ryan M. Williams lives a double life as a full-time career librarian and a multi-genre writer with over twenty books. He writes across a range of genres including science fiction, fantasy, paranormal, mystery, horror, and romance. He earned a Master of Arts degree in writing popular fiction from Seton Hill University and a Master of Library and Information Science from San Jose University. His short fiction has appeared in anthologies from Pocket Books, WMG Publish, and in On Spec Magazine.

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